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  • Writer's pictureRenée West
    • Oct 19, 2023
    • 1 min read

critique 2

- like the personal aspect of the work.

- 50/50 like the hidden text in code

- gotta fix the audio not linking

- add context for painting

- add extra code and see if can expand the idea

- something to understand which works lead to what

- wishes to expand the idea of the hidden code by adding more in some pages

- loved the idea of using personal experience and working through it

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